In his introduction to Diary of a Madman and Other Stories translator Ronald Wilks states that Gogol wrote
as by using apparently irrelevant, trivial details to astonishing effect. Invariably these details are physical, but not at all in the sense in which Tolstoy uses them to develop his characters. Gogol’s characters do not have psychological depth and are developed in the main purely by external physical descriptions. Rightly they have been called waxlike figures, mere puppets.
I disagree slightly with his claim. Yes, Gogol uses details that seem irrelevant and trivial to astonishing effect but I think these trivial details are what give his characters psychological depth. Towards the end of the “The Nose” the doctor (who is an incredibly minor character) is described as such:
Every morning he used to eat apples and was terribly meticulous about keeping his mouth clean, spending at least three quarters of an hour rinsing it out every day and using five different varieties of toothbrush.
Again, that is an irrelevant, trivial detail but Gogol put it there for a reason. Perhaps that reason is only to make his reader laugh, or to further illustrate the world he is creating (after all, the story is about a man who’s nose takes flight one night, ends up inside of a piece of bread, becomes a civil servant and decides to reattach itself some time later) but it also gives us a perfect idea of what kind of man the doctor is. Meticulous. Clean. Afraid of germs. Afraid of his breath smelling. Afraid as coming across as uncouth. Afraid of his teeth falling out. Afraid of looking like some dimwit with no teeth. In that one sentence description, we get to know a lot about this one minor character. There is psychological depth there. It is not spelled out nor is much time taken with it, but it is there.
That being said, the world Gogol has created to set his stories in is quirky. ”Diary of a Madman” is exactly that, diary entries from a man who quickly degenerates from slightly off to completely nuts. It is quaint. Gogol does a fantastic job of creating Poprishchin, a lunatic who is completely unaware of his insanity and is completely sincere right until the very end, when he cannot figure out why the soldiers of Spain (asylum workers) keep beating the him, the King of Spain (in his madness he realizes that he is the heir to the Spanish throne). And it works. For the most part. As Poprishchin worsens his delusions grow larger and larger and the dates of his entries become stranger and more impossible:
April 43rd, 2000
86th Martober, between day and night
The first
January in the same year falling after February
What bothers me here is that the dates keep getting stranger and more confused until they no longer make any sense but Poprishchin’s writing stays (fairly) lucid (for a madman). His sentence structure, grammar and vocabulary do not degrade or become confused. The dates are funny but it doesn’t really work as a device when only one part of the house starts falling apart but the rest remain intact.
So far “Diary” is the weaker of the two stories I have read. ”The Nose” is much richer, more compelling and deals with more themes: social status, physical appearance in society, sexual confidence, medicine. I am starting to wonder why the collection is called Diary of a Madman and Other Stories and not The Nose and Other Stories or The Overcoat and Other Stories. I guess “Diary of a Madman” just sounds a lot cooler and will probably draw more readers than a story called “The Overcoat.”